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北京联盟_本文原题：New insights into properties of treated coated metal
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修改后：Antibacterial and biological characteristics of tantalum oxide coated titanium pretreated by plasma electrolytic oxidation
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北京联盟_本文原题：Report on a case of specific protein poisoning in a diabetic child
修改后：Protein poisoning in a diabetic child: A case report
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原摘要：

Transmission electron microscopy (TEM) has become one of the most powerful techniques in the fields of material science, inorganic chemistry and nanotechnology. In terms of resolutions, advanced TEM may reach a high spatial resolution of 0.05 nm, a high energy-resolution of 7 meV. In addition, in situ TEM can help researchers to image the process happened within 1 ms. This paper reviews the recent technical progresses of applying advanced TEM characterization on nanomaterials for catalysis. The text is organized based on the perspective of application: for example, size, composition, phase, strain, and morphology. The electron beam induced effect and in situ TEM are also introduced. I hope this review can help the scientists in related fields to take advantage of advanced TEM to their own researches.

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Transmission electron microscopy (TEM) is a powerful technique in material science, inorganic chemistry and nanotechnology, due to high spatial resolution and a high energy-resolution. In situ TEM allows researchers to image processes within 1 ms. This paper reviews recent applications of advanced TEM characterization on nanomaterials for catalysis related to size, composition, phase, strain, and morphology. The electron beam induced effect and in situ TEM are also introduced.
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