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南京必有达人雅思托福|锐哥托福丨113分的大神写作范文赏析，干货满满！
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大家好啊 ， 锐哥又和大家见面啦！
今天是托福写作范文解析的第三期~
今天的话题是这样的：
Usually people would need to identify weakness and improve after doing a presentation. Which of the following two ways do you think is better?
-checking the video recording alone
-asking your colleagues and classmates for comments
看到这个词presentation
估计好多人的心理活动是这样的
南京必有达人雅思托福|锐哥托福丨113分的大神写作范文赏析，干货满满！
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「我太难了」
题目里给了我们两个选择
【南京必有达人雅思托福|锐哥托福丨113分的大神写作范文赏析，干货满满！】*坐在小角落偷偷摸摸看自己presentation视频 ， 然后跟我一样知错就改
*厚着脸皮 ， 走出舒适圈 ， 请听presentation的同事同学给点修改建议
我给大家的建议选项是：厚脸皮
为啥呢？
*同事同学是很真诚的 ， 愿意帮助我们
【其实大家都很希望你的presentation大获成功】
*当局者迷 ， 旁观者清嘛 ， 他们能看到我们自身容易忽略的问题
【很多时候 ，我们会觉得自己没问题 ， 但实际上可能问题不少】
正文来啦 ， 看看这次萝卜特又有什么故事呢？
写作范文
Presentation is often required when you need to convey your academic ideas to other members of a class or share your business plans with colleagues. However, for those who are not born with natural eloquence, giving a presentation is tough. People may have divergent opinions on how to identify the weakness in a presentation and thus improve it. My personal choice is to ask classmates or colleagues for comments.
-eloquence [?el?kw?ns] 口才、雄辩、修辞
To begin with, our colleagues or classmates are more sincere to us. We might mistakenly believe that while we are giving a presentation, audiences are waiting to laugh at our mistakes. But the truth is that in most cases, they want to see us succeed. Even if a presentation is not so successful, they still tend to share their true feelings with us and help us make it perfect. This reminds me of my own experience a couple of years ago. I was assigned to give a presentation to a bunch of college students, which was a marketing campaign. One day before the presentation, I practiced and practiced since it would be my first time to be the main speaker in this setting. However, standing on the stage, I was too nervous to follow my original plans. I had to admit that the presentation was awfully tedious, and I felt so sorry about it. Instead of criticizing me, the colleagues from the Marketing Department, who were in the audience, encouraged me. Kun, who later became a friend of mine, told me that they could relate to how nerve-racking it was. In the office, they gave me a lot of sincere suggestions, which helped me to be a better speaker.
-this reminds me of sb's experience/story 用来举例的句型 ， 承接上文的中心句、说理和下面的例子 。


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