江苏龙网

  1. 首页 > 生活 > >

新航道3分钟学雅思|10月15日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 应该与外星生命联系吗？( 二 )


特别提醒：
本文分析完应该与外星人联系的理由后 ， 必须对“危险论”进行回应 。 如果不回应这个观点 ， 则属于回答问题不完整 。
7分范文
Our imagination about beings on other planets has never stopped and reached its climax in such movie series like “Star Wars” and “Star Trek” in 1960s and 1970s. If other life forms do exist, an idea I strongly support, should we, as human beings on the Earth, try to reach out and communicate with them?
A lot of people do not like the idea of sending messages to aliens “out there”. According to their theory, trying to establish communication with other life forms is extremely expensive because it entails designing complex equipment and apparatus. This will consume tons of money, which should be spent solving more practical problems like medical care or education. More importantly, as these people would claim, once they receive our messages and know about our existence, the aliens may invade the Earth and eliminate us all, just like what they do in many movies and science fiction.
There are others who are very enthusiastic about reaching out for aliens on other planets. They are interested in how these different life forms survive and believe their more advanced technology may well help us human beings solve our existent problems. Having been living in the universe as the only intelligent being for too long, many people find it very attractive to reach their brothers and sisters from other planets. It is significant for another reason, too. As the Earth will surely die and disappear into the black hole as many scientists have speculated, we need to be known by our siblings on other planets so that when that day eventually does come, our future grand, grand children will not perish.
Personally, I do not think much of the “danger” theory. If the aliens are less developed than us, they cannot be a threat to us even if they want to; if they are more developed and civilised, the probability that we are killed by them is still lower. Once the xenophobic danger is removed, I believe most of us will welcome the idea of communicating with the intelligent forms outside the Earth, because they can provide us with the much desired companionship and may save us when the Earth expires.
老师笔记
01
Our imagination about beings on other planets has never stopped and reached its climaxin such movie series like “Star Wars” and “Star Trek” in 1960s and 1970s. If other life forms do exist, an idea I strongly support, should we, as human beings on the Earth, try to reach outand communicate with them?
我们对外星人的想像从未停止过 ， 在上世纪60、70年代类似《星球大战》的电影系列中达到高峰 。 如果其他生命形式的确存在（我支持这个观点） ， 那么 ， 我们作为地球上的人类 ， 是否应该尝试走出去与他们沟通呢？
解析
(1) 本段引出话题 ， 然后重述题目问题：人们关于外星人的想像从未停止 ， 但我们是否应该尝试和外星人沟通呢？本文的开头用大家熟悉的影视来引出话题 ， 这是唐老师倡导的“个性开头法”的一种策略 。
(2) Climax 高潮；顶点


推荐阅读


上一篇：青未先生解八字|财星的义象

下一篇：文明珠海|高新区这群萌娃告诉你，什么是新“食”尚！